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yooooo! This bit was _great_! Reminds me of Stolicus :P Such a great way to end a scene, and the most obvious strength of the medium - drafting. I've heard similar things with play by post 🤔

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Salonius the Wise once wrote: A wicked past can only be redeemed by a virtuous future.”

“Famously virtuous, was he?” Padrig asks.

“In point of fact, he was forced to drink poison after he seduced the tenth Despot’s son. But I believe the adage remains quite sound.” Vahid replies.

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Padrig chuckles. “I’m sure if they were here, they could tell us all the wondrous things you can accomplish with a hole in the ground. But they are dead, and we need water today.”

- If there is a such thing as a Shankar Character Moment - it's this. The hardened pragmatist used to making life or death choices in the gutter is talking to a soft, ambitious dreamer about something spectacular, and pointing out wryly that while the arcane _may be_ wonderous, maybe, on the streets of _Baltimore_, you have to see to your needs before your wants. It feels like an Autor flourish, or a call back to previous works, for fans of the writer 😁.

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