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Tom Pleasant's avatar

Man, those rolls sucked. Poor Padrig!

Choices, choices.

I want to see more of the Hillfolk, but this seems like a rush introduction for them. I see the sorcerer as quite a serious, growing threat. This would make the Hillfolk more like a bunch of goons to defeat.

I don't know why the Crinwin attacking in broad daylight doesn't appeal. It almost robs them of their menace beyond the physical threat. Now them launching a surprise attack at night when everyone's asleep? THAT would be terrifying.

I'm going for wildcard, but something truly heinous that bloodies the entire village and leaves scars.

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Jeremy's avatar

I really appreciated the asides where you call out how this might play out at a table and also where you provide more “GM lore” like that suddenly ogres detail.

The inline asides read much more smoothly to me than the footnotes, and I also feel moving them out of the footnotes let them breathe more and grow longer - they give more weight to the GM’s, dice’s, and oracles’ roles in shaping the story.

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